by WilliamShakespear
The author set out to detail an extended intense, carnal interlude and succeeded in style. The affair wasn't a love of lifetime, but would do until that scenario came along. Full marks ! *****
Every boy's dream is to have a MILF lover, or even his own mother!
Congratulations on an excellent tale, told well. Your writing is quite good really, with a demonstrated mastery of grammar, spelling, syntax and punctuation. Your erotic sequences are realistic and extremely sexy. A five star effort for certain.