All Comments on 'No Longer, Yet Still, Mother & Son'

The writing and the erotic content are excellent.

I knew from the first few words that this was going to be excellent and so it was.

Not usually big on incest but this is really good and not much else is. Thanks for saving the day!

Excellent story of boy makes good. Very hot, very well written. The poem was quite well done. Keep it up and write more, much more.

The story is very erotic, but the poem is outstanding and could stand on its own merits, even separated from the story. You have done a number of good stories, but the poem may be the best thing you have ever written.

I all ways,think its a little sad when mother and son realise that childhood has passed and much deeper feelings are emerging.This is an excellent story,well done Ilike all your stories.

love all stevies work...especially with the babies coming. a mother pregnant for her son is very interesting indeed..

whats the evolutionary step for stevie3624 in his story lines?

perhaps a son who openly courts and wins his mother?

that should be interesting..to tell your mom you love her as a woman and wants her and goes out and wins her.

This is a beautiful and very sexy story. Richie, like any normal son, is deeply attracted to his mother's cunt. So you can imagine his thrill on reading his mother's poem of love for his big dick--its beautiful hardness and perfect girth and length, thinking how marvelous it'd feel stuffed up her loving welcoming motherly twat. Having unloaded his balls up his Mom's cunt once, Richie can't wait to do it again and again. Finally, Mom gives in and opens up her twat for her darling son from now on. Rich means to fuck a baby up his mother's cunt, and Mom eagerly agrees. She wants her son's baby as much as he does! Mother and son both know that that's what his perfect stiff cock and potent teenage balls are FOR--so it's motherfucking heaven and lots of incest babies from now on!

Good story. Very well written. The only thing I would have changed would have had the language from the mom be a little dirtier.

That a guy could fall in lust and love with his mother. That I understand. But I just don't get the pregnant fetish. This wasn't a bad story at all until that came into the picture. For me, it ruined the whole story. Nevertheless, some guys seem to get off on it, and if that's their fantasy. So be it. As the old saying goes..."Different Strokes..."

to the previous commenter, impregnating one's mate isn't a fetish you GD spergelord. it's a basic function of sex.

god you are stupid.

to teh author, decent story just needed a little more time in the oven to clean up some things.

Some ways are better than others. Good story.