All Comments on 'No More Beige'

I'm probably biased 'cos you're an Aussie but congratulations if this is your first story I'll be looking for more .

That was awesome. You have a way with words. I like stories where i can see everything in my head clearly and girl did you acheive it. Please do not stop writing. Would even love more of Cara and Dominic. But in general do not stop. :)

good luck in the contest tru...

Wonderful story. Enjoyed it. All the best & goodluck in the contest.

This was an amazing story that was intriguing and sexy. Good luck in the contest, I think this is a winner.

carachters you have here. they exactly know how to behave. just the start when the guy met the woman tells a lot. who cares.

This is a great story and if there is any justice a prize winner.

If this is an example of your early work, I can't wait to see more! You've got a great feel for your characters, and the situation doesn't seem forced. The sex fits the story AND the characters, and I enjoyed the way that we learned about Dominic a little at a time, without a lot of exposition or description.

This is a great story! Keep it up!

It's not perfect (I'm a writer too, who tries hard, and I can see that you do), but it is a sweet and powerful story. Whether or not you win this one, please keep writing. I'm recommending it. You are seriously good.

A few spots that could probably use some polishing, but unlike so many on the net that think they are a story teller, you ARE a story teller.

Don't worry overmuch about any negs you get. you have a talent and you can use it. most of the people that bitch about stuff probably need a life. perfect grammar and prose does NOT a story make...

I know this writing thing isn't as easy as it seems. But if this is your first contest entry, I very sincerely hope you'll be entering more, and of that quality, in future contests.

I enjoyed it. It was an easy and pleasant read. I look forward to more from you.

Great flow, funny banter, hot sex, and a happy ending. Pretty much ticked all my boxes, thanks. :)

Great story, so well put together and sooo beliveable.

A heartfelt story, rich in detail and believable dialogue. Good luck in the competition!

What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed this one. Great character development and really, really hot sex. Good luck in the contest!

Your hot sex descriptions without using vulgar colloquialisms is most appreciated. Nudity and sex is beautiful without vulgarity. Carry on. I just love nudity out in the bush.

What can I say? I only wish I could write like you... So beautifully, lyrically written... so romantic, so erotic...

A lovely piece of work...

My favorite combination. Really a wonderful story, believable characters and great local color. Hope it wins!

Believable story, nice pace, no distracting spelling or grammar errors, well done! Keep writing.

very, very good. Sorry to not see any stories from you for 8 years. Sad