All Comments on 'No More Words'

Neat twist. Well done.

I wasn't expecting the twist; but the bullet in Tim's head was definately a nice touch. Thanks.

Good story and I enjoyed it's predecessor even more. Since no one ever gets hurt in Lit land I was hoping to read a few more tales of Tim taking another beauty or two. Maybe he has a brother? This story's title first reminded me of the song then of Congress. Wouldn't it be nice to see action instead of hearing words. Candace for Congress!

You're <i>good</i>, Jukebox! No doubt about it.

Please read ( killing me softly ) first. This is the second part. Great story, Tim really deserved it.

Clever twist on how she resisted, if your power is in your voice and the other person can't hear it, then you are out of luck.

Talk about a Spanner In The Works for Tim; bastard got only what he deserved...