All Comments on 'No One Will See'

Needs a part 2 and more kinky shit

Incredibly well-written.

A number of things you do extraordinarily well: Introduce the characters through dialogue in the middle of the massage, dropping hints naturally through their conversation so the reader can work out what's going on. That alone is excellent writing right there.

Then, there's the seduction itself. The moment on the massage table is key. A lot of writers would plunge on into the good stuff straight away, but the delay builds up the sexual tension perfectly and your dialogue has already (very economically) established that mother and son will be sharing the same bed. It's very well done.

Then there's the sex. Starting off slow and seductive, it becomes more physical and there are interesting hints of domination later on. Extremely hot, well-described stuff.

All in all, an excellent story. One of the best mother-son tales I've ever read.

Keep Writing!!!

Beautiful. Hope there will be many more episodes. Keep writing.

I’ve always loved when a woman writes mother-son incest. I disagree on the kinky though. More romance please! Maybe anal, but definitely sex outdoors. I like also that he isn’t 18 — he’s matured a bit and had time to learn a bit of how to please a woman.

I guess I'm more of a romantic, to me pain, forced, or what might be called kinky worries me.

We'll see

Its is nice reading one where the son is a little older and not just barely turned 18.

My mother (RIP) was one hot number. I frequently lusted for her even though it was not to happen. I found out after she had passed that she was involved in a pretty sexless marriage to my Dad, not that Dad was not up to it. It was her. After I was born my mother didn't ever want to go through that pain again. (This was long before the "pill"). My Dad had a female friend he would visit periodically to get a injection that his health required. He was getting it from her. Now, I wish I had at least tried to satisfy her. Love these incest stories. It happens all the time. People just don't talk about it however. Still a taboo I guess...

Lovely writing that urged me to keep reading - hoping for more and more sex.

A bit of pain, yes perhaps, but clean warm love makes a story juicier and sweeter.

Nicely done...

has earned as many 5's from me as stories posted. I love your writing..thank you.

Reminded me a lot of when I first started fucking my mom after her divorce! Hot stuff! Holler sometime! mastevens001@yahoo.com

No back story

No build up

Straight to the sex

And I loved it, brilliantly erotic. More please.5 stars from me.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

4* Very nice. Way better than what I can do...write more. It's good.

I like the idea of incest on paper sounds super hot and taboo. But in real life if i was given the oppertunity which i actually was once when i was like 16 but i got super freaking ambarressed and went to get some help from my sister instead...not in that way. Anywho the thought of it in real life turns .me off

good story, hot, short, sweet.

I won’t repeat what Imperator_9 has already said (it was an eloquent and accurate critique), but I would like to add that the son was stated to be interested in kinky sex, and then the mom as well, both before anything "kinky" took place.

Kudos and keep on with the excellent stories!

This was hot enjoyed it very much also this is for the writer if your a female i would love to do the same to you in every way

Very good start, keep writing please. WOW!!!

Yes, more please!

Steamy story, I almost thought the son would slip his cock into mother as she was massaging his chest. I would fuck a girl in high school while her parents were home, she would wear short cotton shorts with no panties. I would slide my sweatpants down just enough to expose my throbbing cock, pull one of her shorts legs to the side and slide right in. We could cover yourselves quickly when her mother would check on us.

Imperator summed my reactions up pretty well. Very well done. Skillful and erotic.

Time through on this one, Jennamonroe! Great story!!!

You know when it got close to the end, I though he was going to butt fuck mom. But then you slowed it down to a great ending. Thanks and keep writing

I read a lot on Literotica. Mostly incest and mostly mom-son incest. I do not usually comment. OMG this is good. You are good. I want more. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

This story has got 257,924 views & 277 faves, that's 1.047 faves per 1k views (an outstanding faves-to-views ratio!)

I really miss my Mom!

killed the story for me. I prefer love stories and there is no love in an open relationship. those are just lets fuck everyone relationships...

"No One Will See:" - I'm disturbed by the roughness her thoughtless son thrashed about her body. His attitude is denigrating, debasing and demeaning. I'm not into that type of disrespect for the female, ever; Mother begrudgingly accepted his belittling of her libido and body and emotional capacity, because her body failed her; she needed the male attention, the male closeness and the sexual awakening of her body and, lastly, her son's dick she needed in her birthing love channel.

You started to lose airspeed when she told him that an open relationship could be healthy, which is total bullshit. Then, you had him 'admit' to being with both men and women and I was done. Whatever you were going for just evaporated at that point.

Just an average story I don't like rough sex with mother and it was to short gave it a 3!!!!!!!!!!

This is good story though brief. It would have been better in my opinon if they had mutally arrived at the desire for oneanother, rather than being nearly a rape.