All Comments on 'No Paradise by the Dashboard Light Ch. 06'

typically coward ending using the suddenly not siblings anyway. way too often used by authors who suddenly at the end of their story don't want it to be an incest couples story. 1 star because of that the switching/swinging stuff it is an old overused thing in incest stories.

I tried to enjoy this series. I couldn't do it though. You need to proof read before you upload your stories. The mistakes are so glaring that they distract your attention from the events of the story. BUY A FUCKING DICTIONARY!