by sr71plt
Go back to writing about young men being dominated, bent over table/barrel/desk/car hood/fence and roughly buggered by their priest/father-in-law/principal/commanding officer/uncle/boss. As you can see, I've distilled the basic scope of your entire writing output, any patterns emerging, d'ya think? Please stop trying to write incest, you suck at it.
To all the pawned losers who have nothing but negative comments perhaps you should try to compose a story yourselves and lets us decide if it's crappy or a good read. This story is very interesting....good beginning. Keep it up!
This is one of the worst stories that I have read on this or any other site!