by petertowers
This is a wonderful series of stories with such an erotic theme.
Voted 5 out of 5. Would have liked to vote more.
Read all five chapters in one relishing swoop; what a terrific read it was too! Really like how you turn a phrase and craft your words; you only wrote one page per chapter and yet told quite a quite a tale without missing a beat. Now that's great writing. I look forward to reading about the next adventure Paul gets "into".... lol
Sorry, wish I could give more but that is the maximum allowed.
I have read these stories now for the second time. Very hot and wonderful work.
It truly needs a finish...........
outstanding my friend......Love all of your stories....keep up the excellent work.
I enjoyed it. For me, just the right amount of dominance and submission.😉
I realize this is a story; however, it reflects too many real life situations. Married 20+ years, and still Thecouple has no idea what the other one really wants. Story ending rated 5 stars.
One of my favorite series. Like all of your work but this one hits all the notes for me. It’s complete as is, but more would be great. Very well done.