by martin_x59
I am a little sad that the story took this turn. I think all the gratuitous sex has cheapened the LOVE STORY of Tommy and Ryan. I liked that you are giving us Ryan's POV and showing us how he met Arthur and what he was doing in his absence. However if he truly loved Tommy he would not be poking all those random men. I also did not like that a couple chapters back Tommy you wrote that Tommy was raped by that lummox.
To anyone who is not familiar with it, it means I love you in German :)
Great chapter by the way.