All Comments on 'No Strings Pt. 03'

Ain't love grand!

5

Thank you so much for posting in quick succession.

A great little trilogy, nice characters and really well done.

Thanks for waiting until the story was completed before submitting! Still think Matt was not very likeable but I did like Lynne. Marla was a bit over the top and Nathan and Teresa were superfluous to the story for the most part. I did like the HEA. Thanks

Excellent read. Hot hot hot. Loved the characters. 5stars

Loved Part 3 immensely. Well constructed and pulled all the plot lines together in a nice bow. 5*

You jumped from first person to third in two of the sections. Very disrupting and poorly designed.

The overall story featured boring and common tropes: tons of money, fantastic fighter, sexual prowess. Overall this rates a ‘meh’ for a score.

Wonderful story. Thank you got posting each chapter on consecutive days. 5 dtars

Great job 😍👍👍👍 and great writing keep them coming.

A good story, well worth the read. Maybe a little twee and too sugary sweet in places but still worth reading. 5⛤

You fulfilled the fantasy expectation admirably. And you redeemed the Matt/Lynne relationship from the hokeyness that was such a turnoff in the second installment. I see this as a fully satisfying conclusion. But unlike some of your other story lines, I feel no desire to follow up and learn more about the future of Matt and Lynne.

Incidentally, I think you did an excellent job from the craftsmanship standpoint. Did you get outside help with the proofreading and editing?

5 stars.

All the stories for this cuck writer is of manwhores and their multiple skanks, or swingers open marriages and other trailer park trash

Another typical themed fare by a manslut writer

Was doing OK with this story through Parts 1 and 2 and then it lapsed into nonsense. Fixing up Nathan with Theresa on the Niagara trip was ridiculous, but it was obvious that he was just a rebound with Lynne. The whole finale with Marla giving millions to Lynne and our hero was a bit of sill daydreaming. Fantasy is OK, but keep it in the realm of the possible. I was hovering between a 3* and 4* rating until the finale and then ended up with a disappointed 2*. On to another author.

Another fantastic series with a happy ending! Love your writing. The dry humor in this one was especially nice. Thanks.