by fastandsloppy
I love the circumstances they end up in but I get a major turn off when the wife shows multiple personality issues. Some times she is manipulative , some times she is scared , sometimes she is buttshit crazy. Compared to hubby , she looks more like a plot device with random personality trates throughn in there whenever the 'plot' demands it. Hubby is just a typical loving-wife moron that shuts up and doesn't speak but only thinks and thinks and thinks.
Ch. 2 was better , waiting for Ch. 4
of where Fast and Sloppy is going with this, but I have a very good idea of where I'll be next week, checking the "New" submissions for chapter 4 of this intriguing saga!
What interests me is the combination of the hot, often very kinky sexual activity and the wonderful, complex relationship between the couples--each of them juggling excitement with fears about (in her case) what she is turning back into and (in his case) the future of their relationship.
Bravo to the author--two more chapters eagerly awaited!
thanks, ohio
First time i've seen it in context... Good job!
(And hot story too... i've always had a cop fantasy... as well as thing for buff Africans...)
Thanks,
svie