All Comments on 'Nora and Ben, A Story of Love'
by L.A. Wicker
- 16 Comments
L.A. Wickerabout 18 years agoAuthorHi people. This story is much better than the votes it's getting. If you just want to jerk-off to something, please do not slam my story.
tommacabout 18 years agoGreat story I hope you aren't done with it yet. I always enjoy your stories keep it up.
Anonymousover 17 years agoIt wasn't a jerk off story. It was a well written, wonderful, sweet, hot and terrific story. It was real writing about a very delicious subject. By the way, I like that Nora smokes. That makes her more motherly in my opinion, which I like a lot.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoThis is probably the most wonderful, sweet, romantic story on this site. Offcourse, I have not read them all but truly,you did an awesome job. I absolutely loved it and was very sad when I came to the last page. I was so caught up in Nora and Ben and really feeling their love and I wanted more. If that is your thing you could absolutely turn this into a romance novel. I would but it in a second.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThe beginning was good, hooking you right into the story.
But the author should have cut out all that stuff between Nora and the doctor at the hospital. It just interrupts the love story.
Mleebabout 15 years agoThe beginning was good, hooking you right into the story.
But the author should have cut out all that stuff between Nora and the doctor at the hospital. It just interrupts the love story.
PS What's with the author:
1) Misunderstanding the comment about this not being a "jerk-off" story. That comment was commending the story and complimentary.
2) Pleading with readers that the story is better than the votes it has been getting???? Who says?
Anonymousover 10 years agoI had a hard time keeping up with the location of the two and their surroundings. Calling his dick long and slim made it sound too small. Ben seemed childish.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis seemed like Ben was retarded. This story would have had a different feel if Ben had been a Jock or solidly built.
Anonymousover 7 years agoThis was a great story of love a nd more I hope you wright more like it pleeses
I like story of yuonger men meetting oldr wemen , this had good way for them to fall
in love . like the story line and five is to low 10 is better I enjoy story like thees
pleese write more you have a gift thanks for shareing it with all of us . from DC newrancher
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis needs an 'overhaul', seriously. There are things like the reference to 25 years that only need one telling....any more than that makes it a drag. Spell/English check this too....word gaps/mis-spellings are a distraction from the story line !
