All Comments on 'Nos Faux Ratu Ch. 03'

and things are just getting started, and i really think that is a lot more to jenna than nesse realizes and when she finds out, i think things are really going to change and that the night breeds will never be the same

really brilliant, a pleasure to read and follow eagerly. keep writing more - erotica plus great storyline = awesomeness. :D

This is the type of stuff I keep looking for. A good story with some substance that actually makes me groan when I read the last sentence. Thank you! Can't wait for the next installment!

This is always the worst part of a new EvilAlpaca story - the first couple of pieces are posted before I notice, but then I get caught up with the posting schedule and actually have to WAIT for the rest ;)

-Zengar

This has go to one of the most interesting and new world ideas i have read in a long time. I love the political climate of this story. The characters and the detail of who they are is spot on with the flow of the story. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas

Waiting; I've been such a good girl, waiting for the next chapter. But, it's been days now. Days and days and days. Pretty please, Evil, post the next installment? ~ella

Would have been a Great story had it not been homosexul

EvilAlpaca is one of the great writers of this site and one of the things that make this site great is the complete freedom of creativity, unburdened by things such as bias and narrow-mindedness. If this isn't your cup of tea, mr. anonymous, go to Barnes and Noble.

So hopefully healing is on the path ...... This girl needs light in her soul ....... I was never really int scifi but your ART is breathtaking