by Evil Alpaca
By far the best story I've ever had the pleasure of reading, I'm so glad you decided to share this with us. This story is just unbelievable, this chapter alone is good enough to be a movie. The way you write makes it so easy to visualize everything, I hope you continue this story for as long as possible though I know someone as talented as you will eventually come up with another amazing world you want to share and you will have to end this one. I can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully the next ten chapters please don't keep us waiting for too long.
OK so you are not totally evil. This is such a great story. Love it cant wait for more. Thank you for sharing. Mechmanas
Sorry I haven't reviewed since the first chapter, but I've had no idea what to say until now. The pacing has been slow, but it hasn't at all felt unnatural at any point. And my GOD, the character development... one of the reasons I love your stories so much is because of the characters. I just know this is going to be one of those stories that I come back to multiple times.
...perfect. Just perfect. I love all your other stories but you are truly outdoing yourself with this one. ~ella
I'm in love with Jenna (or I wanna be her). So cool. I love all your stories but this one...well there are just no words that encompass the depth of feelings that this story is making me feel. Please Please Please don't be long in releasing Ch.8, 9, ...20..lol hoping for lots of story to come. :) Jane Eyre
Amazing story. Sorry I have not commented on the earlier chapters, but I cound not wait to get to the next chapter. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
For my money that's probably the best single chapter out of all the thousand or so tales I've read on this site.
All of your stories are awesome, outside of "Flying Blind" this is my favorite story.You really know how to tell a excellent story. Plot, character evolution, and an incrdeble imagination make you a favorite in my book. Thank you for sharing.
Simply Awesome
I just had to second that comment, so it stays longer.
Loosing a soulmate is for every being a painful happening, but a mother "loosing" in whatever circumstances the child must be pure horror for a soul ...... Thank you EvilAlpaca for letting Jenna heal in complete form , even as vampire ...... This story races my heartbeat to extremes