All Comments on 'Nostalgia Ch. 02'

This story was all over the place! I have no idea if the people’s name’s Ive read are even pertinent to the story, this bitch is scared of people and we don’t know why. There’s no explanation as to why she feels the way she does! I tried to hold on but I think I’ve done my duty. I skipped forward to the end of this chapter to leave a comment. Your writing is quite good but it’s like I’m reading 5 different damned stories at one time and each one is in some sort of weird code! Good luck!