All Comments on 'Not My Type: Adele Ch. 05'

I needed a cold shower after this chapter! You are the best!

There's only one problem, this chapters are not coming fast enough!!

take care!

As well as the setup for the next story in the series, I hope?? (please please please please please? :)

I love the fact that you keep teasing and leaving us hanging. I also love the chemistry between your characters. Keep up the good work...and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I know, everybody (including me) was begging you to let it happen, but we can't forget where Nate is coming from. I got really excited about the cliffhanger but wasn't disappointed when Nate pulled out. You have created such complex and real characters, and I love the story.

But please don't make us wait too long ;-)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

OK. I might be in the minority but I'm glad nothing happened. We've seen (as well be convinced alot of other folk) that a lasting relationship can't possible be so with "trying on the shoes first". Dude, it alot more serious than shoes and glad to see Nate didn't go the route of some other men of the cloth. Loved it and I'm not on the seat of my chair with the introduction of Matt's boss!!!! Interesting....................I'm not going to dwell on it because I'll get too excited. Thanks and great writing. Hope you are having fun with it. Five stars. Lakergirl

Though it was a surprise that they didn't 'do the deed', it was also refreshing. Taking the time to get to know each other is somewhat a lost practice in this day and age.

When you finally let them come together (so to speak), I'm sure it will be beyond hot!

To let them do the deed, I mean. But you stayed true to your characters. You're a stronger woman than me. ;-)

Really looking forward to finding out how Nate gets to keep his promise!

Lily

-x-

...so that's Felicity. Well, I guess there a story to it. ;-)

I really appreciate the way your stories evolve and the detail you give to the different persons especially their emotions. The hesitation of both Adele and Nate do feel real and makes the story swing. I really like to know if Nate has his own demons like your heroine.

Yours truly

Michael ;-)

but most definitely aching. that was a great installment and fully true to the character of the story that they would not have slept together. thank you for not leaving us wondering how Nate was feeling in the light of day.

I'm a huge fan... I feel like I know your characters and I've been hooked since the very first story. I'm so happy to read each chapter as they arrive, thankfully there are a lot more Tanners that I hope will keep you inspired (Looks like Matt & Felicity are next?) Thank you so much, please, please keep writing!!!

LP

As always a wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read more.

BUHlievable... All week long, you had me singing 'Sail away with me honey I put my heart in your hand'. And now, my heart just shattered in pieces for Adele. First, I thought I was mad because Nate and Adele deserved each other but were not getting anywhere. But then I realized I was mad because Adele deserved the best happiness long overdue. I so ached for Nate to console her when she was hurting. And now I am just plain mad at myself for grieving along with a fictional character!

I hope you do realize that if you could make someone go insanely obsessed with a story, you have definitely got a true, raw talent. Ok, so that was Felicity. Can we get back to Adele and Nate now, please?

this story (and all your stories) is wonderful. as others have said, i find myself really caring for the characters. i can't help but wonder what is going through nate's head!

i love you stories and their characters ( and i flick is going to be a feisty one) hope to see more soon, as they are so enjoyable and funny

I don't know why I even bother to write when I can just sit back and read your beautiful work. Did I mention I have started hyping this story on my Twitter feed? No eh? :-) Yes, I am very evil, very, very evil...(and I wonder if Jason has that boat ready yet...I should go and check...You are the world to me.) Well done.

Woo hoo! Can't wait for you to get to that part.

Great language, surprising twist and deadly romantic... more..more...more... and please as soon as possible

i'm all geared up for the next part. i absolutely cannot wait to continue reading this story. so romantic and thrilling and it just gives me chills reading that last part! :)

But, J, you may remember how "picky" I can be. With all of the very true accolades, I have to think that you meant for Nate to turn very suddenly from reverend to rogue not "rouge".

I have read all of the not my type saga, i love all of it, can't wait for the next installment!

We definately need to have great writers like yourself entering stories in LITEROTICA'S Special Contests. The contest starts next month - why nnot reward your faithfull readers with an entry

jim

Ahhhhh! You're killing me, but I love it!

...having to wait until you post the next installment :( I thought you said you had the story all written out??

"Whatever they imagine happened between the two of us will pale in comparison to when it actually does"

So freakin' sexy. I wonder if I'll ever hear words that sexy from a man! Phew! Beautiful, FK! :)

I've been reading voraciously chapter by chapter - all day - in between work, on the subway, etc, etc! It's great so far! On to the next chapter... :-D

the rev is the sexiest man alive. at least in all the stories i've ever read here. such discipline!

MALE person here!

Them folks what likes story DEVELOPMENT?

As I read these, I marveled that I had already issued stars...?

Until this one. I had clearly worn out with all the heartfelt pondering,

non-credible barriers, and convenient flimsy delays.

So I abandoned story.

It is OVERWHELMINGLY OBVIOUS that females are adoring All This.

I'm happy for you, Lady Readers. We can stipulate to the Mars/Venus differential?

I adore the intelligence, well observed details, and occasional Bingo phrase.

Id est, like Nate bundling the parishioners out after church service. Perfect!

I also have an inexhaustible appreciation for Happy Endings...(Your opening promise.)

Therefore, I will slog on to that fulfillment.

Love to All...:+)))