by firstkiss
I like this story line alot. It's tender, erotic, everything that you could ask for in a story. Really glad to see that Adam wasn't just a one-night stand.
Very nice that Adam came back and wasn't anything like what her friends expected. Bringing in the big brother is a great touch. A bit of conflict to spice things up, can't have everything go smooth, life doesn't work that way. Keep up the very good work!
I'm lovin' this story and "bad boy" Adam! I love the twist with the brother, it throws a whole new degree of difficulty into things. Waiting patiently for more!
Loving this story and their romance. The unexpected twist at the end definitely ensures that this story just gets better and better.
I can't tell you how happy I was to see a new story of yours, and this did not disappoint! Hot and sexy as always. And I never thought I would see my home province featured in erotica!
Finalmente!! I can't wait for the next one!! To be honest, I've been waiting like two weeks for the next chapter of whatever to come out... Every day I was looking for a new chapter of one of your stories... Please, continue writing.... *drools* I like it allot :D
Thank goodness you continued this story! Been anxious to find out what happened next. Can't wait to read more about Adam and Lilly. And the action was as hot as ever!
I seriously checked your profile every day to see when you'd post your next story. The story is fantastic and putting in all the details of the setting of P.E.I. was amazing. I'm Canadian as well so I'm impressed.
You are definitely the best writer on here! I love that Adam is so tough looking but such a sweetheart! Adam isn't my type as well but I might have to reconsider that! And the addition of the brother to the story was totally unexpected and perfect!
Write more. I love that you've started to give a bit of Lily's backstory. And Adam- yum. Thanks for writing.
Thank you! I think this is my favorite now! Adam is so hot! I want him!
...a great mix of playfulness and passion. Glad to see you back at work!
Oh, please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! All of your stories are wonderful, and I wish they'd go on and on. You are a fabulous author. Thank you for taking the time to write something that not only gets a girl hot and bothered, but stimulates the mind as well.
I love your stories, and anxiously await your next installment.
Loved the name of the cat:) can't wait to see how this ends-would love to see stories of each of the girls! throw rhiannon at Joe and maybe then he'll leave kid sis alone! looking forward to another chapter:)
You have a wonderful way of telling a story that captures the emotions and brings it to life. Nice to read stories that are not the neanderthal approach to sex and women.
I suppose part of it is "knowing" that a woman (?) wrote it and that these are genuine feelings.
Very well done!!
So many erotic stories are so full of "slam bam" that they are not good reads. This series is definitely a good read, and consistent with that, very endearing. Just guessing the suburban cowboy is going to find out what the "farmer" girl's background is like, and that she will probably eventually have to find out where he is from. It is a great subplot so far.
The interaction between the two main characters so far is very timid, tender, and loving on top of hot. Or is it beneath the heat it is timid, tender, and loving?
I knew that you are an amazing author, but for you to have decided to name Lilly's cat Lucy Maud? That just reminds me of why you are one of my favorite authors here.
- Kristina
loving it! glad to see some Canadian scenery helping the romance!
Such fine writing.
Stories so well told!
Where's the HEART icon?!!!!
It's 11:35pm. I'm not putting this down until the end...
Great characters, great story.
Great writer.
Thank you.
Wish I had you strength. It's 3:04 and I FINALLY gathered enough strength to stop.