All Comments on 'Not My Type: Rhiannon Ch. 05'

Keep it up

I was going to be very upset at Lily....but ....and I love Adam...he is such a great character....but Joe...oh..Joe is special....can not wait for more.....

Holy shit the fucking soup. Hahaha. Perfect human level. I love it. Mas por favor.

you f***ing tease. This is brilliant!

I'm checking every day for more, pleeeeeaaaase give us another chapter soon!

cant wait for the next chapter.

Please update again soon!

Not My Type was good, you captured the characters brilliantly, but this one is so much better. Joe and Rhi and the rest of them come alive in this story. You've portrayed real emotions here and make the characters and storyline believable.

make such wonderful foundations for good fiction, and you have produced those with your character develoments. Your characters are gaining strength in each one of your series. This is excellent, first-class writing in any league.

Another great chapter. Thank you!

Another great chapter. Loved every bit.

You have me absolutely addicted! Can't wait for the next chapter.

What else can I add to what's already been said? A thrilling chapter. It's clear you love and know these characters. (R)

Just plain good reading :) Fantastic.

i loved all your other stories. but i really think you broke rhiannon's spirit with this one. in order to fix her situation with everyone, u made her evolve into someone who could handle it. but in the process... u broke rhiannon. she's not rhiannon anymore... you might as well have given her another name. i was so sad for her.

I love this series. great character descriptions and your writing allows me to visualize in my mind each scene really well. looking forward to more.

... I think this is exactly how Rhiannon would evolve when she found out she was pregnant. She's totally overwhelmed by her new situation and it has opened her eyes to many different things she never had a need to pay attention to anymore. I also think she's always been envious of Lilly and her big family, now she's got a chance for it and a guy who wants her for who she is, not just what he can get from her for a couple nights.

I'm really enjoying the direction you're going with this story. I think Rhiannon's characterization and behavior are evolving and working in the story beautifully. Plus, I just Adam; he's such a sweet guy and a good friend. I'm intrigued about the new guy, Nate. Wonder what his story is? ;)