All Comments on 'Not Quite the Brady Bunch Ch. 04'

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goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
i liked the concept

and the writing was solid. It's just there's no ending. Did the wife come home? what happened? you just left us hanging. i didn't rate it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very well written. Sparked my imagination, left me wanting more. Wanting to taste a woman as Mike takes my virgin ass.

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