All Comments on 'Not Such a Plain Jane Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A guy's dream come true

This story has got to be every guy's dream come true. Two hot bisexual exhibitionist females looking for sex.

norcal62norcal62almost 14 years ago
Again, learn to use contractions in your stories.

I can only think that someone is paying LW authors by the word because so many writers don't use contractions. The story thus sounds stilted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

illiterate shit.

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