All Comments on 'Not Yet'

I loved the set up and the sex was hot.

There were a few misspellings and misuses of words, but far less than in most stories on this site. The dialogue was very realistic and sexy as were the descriptions. The theme was very good.

I really only have one problem with this story. I realize that some level of suspension of disbelief is necessary to enjoy any fiction, especially in this genre but the number of times that this guy was able to come and the ease with which he got it up again really was beyond any reality. Even with two, or ten beautiful women stimulating him, even if he was a horny eighteen year old, that is beyond belief; unless he is Superman.