by sthsth
Thanks. I was worried people might have been overly critical of the idea being too outlandish. She's probably in my top five favorite porn stars.
Page 1 paragraph 5. The past participle of "shine" is "shone" not "shined"
I love the story progression and the fact that this sheltered guy would have a famous porn star living next to him. Everything just feels right. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Thanks for the encouragement. I'm currently finishing up my As You Wish series, but I do plan on coming back to this at some point. I just have to write where I'm inspired.
At some point I intend to come back to this in same way or form. I just have to write where I'm inspired.