by salimak
I really like this story, very descriptive and arousing. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Selima,
That was terrific: so sexy, so erotic, you carried me along with you as the excitement built to several climaxes.
More please, you have a talent that you should share. (You also have a sublime bum, assuming the photo is you, to go with your sexy mind).
That's the first story of yours I've read and I'm a big fan already. xxx
I wasn't sure if you'd continue with this story since it had been a few years, but wow - you took things in an unexpected direction with the parents and it was sublime. Well worth the wait. Your writing style is finely balance between erotic and heartfelt, which I truly love.
I love your writing. I love the way you write about men's bodies and your desires. It doesn't feel like objectification, or self-absorbed getting off. It feels like unabashed erotic human connection. I love the way you write about your body and its arousal and sensations. I love the expressiveness of your sentences and the way they flow. You're awesome.