All Comments on 'Nude Day, Birthday, Art Grade'

Oh yes! Very nice. Look forward to Chapter 2 The Special Event.

One small criticism, proof read the story before submission, auto-complete has introduced a few errors.

I enjoyed this very much. I was even hoping it would last longer. BTW, the pace was good, although the end seemed a bit rushed.

I hope you will continue the story of the rest of the day, and not let the last paragraph stand in for it.

I second the idea that you should proofread. I saw fewer typos than I do in most stories here, but there were a few. Additionally, Cassie's parents met 19 years before today, not 18.

I hope you are motivated to continue this story! Nude Day is becoming quite a well known day!

needs another chapter.

Cannot WAIT for chapter 2. This is delicious and well written!