by amazingrace69
I really enjoyed this story - the slow build up and the powerful climax.
Hope there is a part 2.
Why worry about wet spots on a lady's bathing suit, unless cheating a naked male lover on Red Beach Nude Day?
Grace. I happen to know you were in Greece recently. Are you writing reality and passing it off as fiction? You naughty girl. Sorry I'm a pasty white guy and not a bronze Greek god. Cheers.
Yes, Roden, I was recently in Greece. But you know what they say...what happens in Greece, stays in Greece ;)
It'd be better suited to Erotic Couplings than to Romance.
I loved it! Well written, enough character development to make the sex an enjoyable read for me. I was just sad that the story ended! I can see this as the beginning chapter of a novella...
Shades of "Shirley Valentine", this Greek beach boy is not to be trusted. He says that he works at the Greek Embassy but they are sitting on a beach in Greece! Run while you can or face a lifetime of servitude in a clip joint in Beirut. (Yeah, I know that's in Lebanon but it's more oriental and mystical innit?) M222RJR.