by m_storyman_x
Not my experience of hospitals, but the experience I might have wished for. I'm coming back to check your other stories!
I do have my favourite authors but I will check out your other stuff. I could have used this kind of nursing after my brain tumor operation. But she just got married. I think of her as my little English pain specialist. In case you're reading HEY JOANNE.......Babe you have beautiful tits. Yes, I saw you.
I've never broken anything, even though I'm over 50! The couple of minor ops I've had in the last ten years have needed only a couple of days in hospital, so I never got this kind of chance - maybe I should go and get myself properly broken!
Really loved it - can we have more, PLEASE?
I think there are a whole lot of places yet to go on this story - as a bike ride - ect.ect.!! Live together - marriage or just plain love each other. Write like they say in Cajun Country, kick it up a notch.! Great story and really enjoyed the way you layed it out. Thanks.
Very hot story. I loved the sex and the budding relationship made it even hotter.
The bit with the the breaking up with the girl friend felt forced and just interupted the flow of the story without really adding anything though.
I really enjoyed the story and how it built. I also think the break up in the middle broke the flow. Also having spent about a month in the hospital when you are in pain and on meds sex is not the first thing on your mind and I dont think some one with broken ribs could do what he did. But I enjoyed the story
Great story, well written. Your characters developed nicely.
A continuation would be well received.
This was a nice story, it moved along, it was erotic, but... not only is it unethical for a nurse to carry on with a patient, we can't. In the hospital, we have 6-8 to care for and we can hardly run off with one. We don't even bathe or toilet them ourselves generally these days, it's left to the unlicensed staff, we're too busy. So needless to say we wouldn't exactly get the chance to fool around with one. Although they do get aroused.
I know I'm being picking bringing in that pesky reality and you certainly didn't make her out to be a slut at all which I really, really, really appreciate. And it was a well written, sexy, sexy story that earned from me five stars!!!
Airdrie, an Ivy League trained RN
I understand your point. Yes reality can kill the buzz of a story. Maybe he just has really good healthcare. Hah. No but seriously nurses are very important in what they do.
Not even a need to ignore any loyalty or integrity issue in this one - it is the kind of fantasy that is purely a winner for everyone -
And having worked in hospitals most of my life and had a stay or two in them as well, it is not entirely impossible just very unlikely - which makes it perfect -
Great job-
I only wish more of the many stories I read could live up to the level of this one.
Sorry I am not a member so have to sign on as many others that really don't want writers to know who they are, sorry.
Papagriz
As reading this story, it is so well balanced and paced to flow without showing all the beans ay once. The story is is written as good as it gets. The content of this story didn't hurt either ; being all peachy and fuzzy. Even before the girlfriend arrived I was hoping she faded away. The main characters had found a piece of life's apple pie in a gentle heart warming slow building love. I can find anything more gratifying in a story unless you have a sequel. This author was skillful and masterfully developed and nailed a little heavenly love story to perfection. Thank you for a piece of heaven!!!
Spicy, enjoyable, believable and well paced, thought out. A little erotic mind games between adults without being craziness. The last part where she comes into his room all gussied up makes the big statement, she bought the "A" game after she figured he was all into her. The other nurse just helped the both of them out by the plain language facts of what she saw. Superb!!
These type stories are great when thrown in!
This is a very beautiful story realistic and nice, like it A LOT!
It is nice to read some story sometime that does warm your heart. I like the more explicit stories very much too. But once in a while it is nice to have something a little nit deeper.
Very nicely written.
Thanks!
I forgot to write that it would be very nice to see this story developed into a multi-part story.
The two main characters are worth it.
i agree. too short. i want to see what his "shady" girlfriend's reaction...haha
Cries out for a sequel / continuation of the story. A chapter 2 is needed.
Well written and quite romantic too! I want more of your stories.
I had a 2 week stay in the hospital last year and I was blessed with several angels posed as nurses. A couple that I would have died for a relationship with.