All Comments on 'Obedience'

The only reason I wasted thirty seconds on this was to see whether the author would add a twist to the standard defloration line. He did not. No plot. No suspense.

I read it and I liked it.

A delightful yarn. I'd like to read a bit more plot development at the end: perhaps a second chapter ... Where does she go from here?

I love your stories. This is one of my favorites.

Thank you!

I didn't see much original or arousing, and I love the first time genre.

Although it could use a bit more suspense.

I love reading your stories especially the first timers. I think youve became a favorite of mine. I cant say this enough men in charge does things to me. Love your short stories :-)

A romantic seduction of naïve female. Author maintains tone of gentle fantasy.