All Comments on 'Obsession Ch. 02'

The story played out a bit better in the second chapter, but still not as good as your other efforts.

Had a good ending and that's important.. I was hoping Alan would pick up his revolver and Tyler would blow him away.. But I guess I can conclude that Alan will go away for muder and kidnapping---chair!! Lights go dim and another one bites the dust!

loved it. the ending was sweet!

True, it's a fictional story. It is also absolute bilge.