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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Inconsistant

In the first paragraph the guy is working in a machine shop and 5 mins later he works in a paper bag place for $3.50 an hour? Huh?

magmamanmagmamanover 7 years agoAuthor
Not clear..sorry

I was actually doing both, I opened my own shop at the time, working some evenings and weekends when I got a job in, and worked the day shift in a paper bag plant since just getting started, business was kind of slow.

Sorry for not explaining that.

MGM

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Full price would have been a good gamble. But I understand young and lack of money.

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