All Comments on 'Odd Jobs Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Cuckold story without a big warning sign, so one star obviously.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

I was so hoping that you'd get the mom involved with the fun. I'm glad to see that this is just the first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Five stars and a favorite point!

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Well!.....Let me catch my breath! I could sure use a cigarette after that last scene too bad I quit.

Great story many twists along the way. I had expected some sort of meeting or confrontation with the ex but nope. Sure a lot going on in that house and Dad is blissfully ignorant.

Like your style. Keep up the good work.

5 stars from the Sage.

Cheers

SAGE

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 3 years ago

OMG! Cannot wait for your next installment. Good reason you are on my list of following authors!

HighpikeHighpikeover 3 years ago
Please please please

Post the next chapter soon.

rockyracoon2512rockyracoon2512over 3 years ago

Love this story. Need a follow up.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Great Story

Carried along and enjoyed it immensely. Roll on the next chapter. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I need more!

next chapter pls

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
next chapter please

great story can't wait for the next chapter maybe he has an aunt and cousin visit.

dbsidedbsideover 2 years ago

Surprised ending and no part 2! "NO undies?"

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...