by m_storyman_x
I was so hoping that you'd get the mom involved with the fun. I'm glad to see that this is just the first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Five stars and a favorite point!
Well!.....Let me catch my breath! I could sure use a cigarette after that last scene too bad I quit.
Great story many twists along the way. I had expected some sort of meeting or confrontation with the ex but nope. Sure a lot going on in that house and Dad is blissfully ignorant.
Like your style. Keep up the good work.
5 stars from the Sage.
Cheers
SAGE
OMG! Cannot wait for your next installment. Good reason you are on my list of following authors!
Carried along and enjoyed it immensely. Roll on the next chapter. 5 stars
great story can't wait for the next chapter maybe he has an aunt and cousin visit.