All Comments on 'Oddball Ch. 01'

Well-writ, Easily-Readable. .. Quite believable characterisation.

......Though I think the makers of " Grease " might be contacting you about plagiarism after the next couple of chapters.

Cheers, and Well-Done.....

Kilroy

I like where this is going, even though the plot is totally transparent at this time. Nice character development. Realistic situations and dialog. <p> But it would be nice to have someone else read it before publishing, to weed out the several typos and missing word situations. A minor distraction from an otherwise well crafted story.

I like the whole underdog theme going on. I am a sucker for people picked on who ends up with the guy/girl :) dont keep us waiting to long though would love to see how these to end up

I loved to read this story, the plot is really great. The Main Plot really took me in and the side plots are a good addition. Especially the character of Leah is interesting and I would love to read more of her and her husband in the next part.

Short: Keep on writing!

So far I'm loving this story & can't wait to read more.

Would you please hurry up and release the rest of this story I really liked it and would like to read the rest of it! Thanks

except my life is the other way around (but i'm not religious if you get what im saying...)

this story is alot better than i thought it was gonna be. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work

Grace is a lot crazy... somebody needs an eval

Don't let me down!!!

Thanks. Though, Tank hitting Amber was more than disappointing....

I know now what I'll be reading all day.

I must say that I agree with those who say that profanity is a sure indicator that one has a limited ability with the chosen language. Yours is excessive and detracts from your story.

I hope Mary escapes from under the clutches of yet another miserable self repressing Jesus freak.

Oh, and some comments don't like profanity? Well Christ on a bike wearing rollerskates, there's a fucking Goddamn shocker. Jesus freaks complaining about profanity on a porn story website. Jerking off while begging for forgiveness? Self-loathing hypocrites. "Judge not, lest ye be judged" ring any bells?