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Click here"Merry Christmas," she smiled as her parents looked at her from their perch on the couch.
"And Merry Christmas to you too, Miss Santa's Helper have to run out of here at the crack of dawn," Leah teased.
"I had to get Georgette her Christmas presents," Mary protested.
"Come here, we want to tell you something," John smiled.
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Chin Li swallowed her disappointment; John's gift was a fairly cheap ID Bracelet. She had hoped for a promise ring, or even an engagement ring.
Dutifully, she pasted a smile on her face and fastened the bracelet to her wrist.
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"Oh, Thomas!" Mary excitedly greeted the large youth as he stamped his feet in the bitter cold of DeGarde, Louisiana.
Merry Christmas," he said and entered the warm house.
"And Merry Christmas to you," He greeted Leah and John.
"Come on, let's give them some 'alone time,'" John coaxed Leah.
Thomas had stopped by the garage and told John what he planned for Mary's Christmas present. John had cried openly in front of the embarrassed Thomas, but agreed that Thomas could give Mary what he planned to give her.
"What?" Mary asked, confused. "Why we need alone time?"
"Well, we don't, really," Thomas said and got down on one knee. "But I guess they wanted us to have some privacy."
"What are you doing?" Mary asked, baffled by everyone's strange behavior.
"I'm asking you if you'd marry me, you oddball," Thomas smiled as he showed her the platinum engagement ring.
The End of 'Oddball 07c.'
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoFar too complex. I consistently lose track of who/where everyone is and how they got there. Some of the story lines seem to have pretty much lost completely. I stuck with it hoping to find more erotica with a bit less Literature. I think that I may now go back to my old attitude of declining to read anything longer than two pages and one chapter. Brevity is becoming a lost art.
LovelyLvsover 11 years agohappy proposal completley overshadowed by david! poor john! i know he was basically raping david, but i was really hoping for an rougher hea...
Anonymousover 11 years agoI love your stories, but I wish you'd learn where the hymen is or avoid virgin sex altogether. That or look hymen up online.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoThere are so many different stories going on I think it would have been better if you'd written them all individually. There are far too many tangents and it would be better, for the reader, if you could concentrate on the main characters Mary and Thomas.
