All Comments on 'Of Sisters & Brothers Pt. 01'

Keep it up, very good. Continue, you got no choice.

I've enjoyed your previous efforts, but this just rambles along. Not a good start.

I'm not sure you have the right platform for this story. I like your style and have read your other submissions. I don't agree with the previous comment - it is long but the plot is being developed. I will reserve judgment until I have read the next installment. You are a gifted writer. Keep it coming.

I like the suspense and action in this piece. Please write more to continue the story!!

This is not a typical short story but leaning towards a novel. It's captivating and I am enjoying it. I like your use of the thesaurus, too!

very boring and nonerotic would have been better in either the nonerotic area or novels area so boring i fell asleep.

Wasted a lot of time reading this to end up with a few lines of erotic writing and the rest boring drivel

This is very very different. But I'm hooked. Keep writing.

Fuck anyone who doesnt like this story go jack off to something else I me as n come in it literotica pick your poison this story rocks cant wait for pt 2 sincerly BD

Really enjoyed the story. Liked the correct use of english grammar.

Looking forward to further chapters.

Well done.

Len

This guy writes ... Here!? Awesome story that would make a great novel if the uptight publishing industry would let US deal with it. Write on Sir!