by jasliz
Another story that proves 1-5 isn't accurate enough. 8 out of 5 stars.
...of most of your work. This one was no exception. Really hot, loved the characters. I'm a romantic so I'm sad it didn't work out , but you set it up very early that it wasn't going to, so the blow wasn't too bad by the end.
Nice story. I am waiting eagerly for the next part of your Master and the ring series.
It'd be nicer if not for the 80,000 punctuation, spelling, & other mistakes!!
If you need an editor, this is often the place (after a story, in comments) the place & way I volunteer.
I don't know if you even get these . This many years later . But no punctuation complaints here . The story was perfect . So good . Oh and a shout out from Arizona .
Just to show you ... when a guy knows its impossible ... in his mind there's always that little bit of hope.