All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 007'

I think the scene is setting up very nicely. My only quibble at the moment is that it's not very dramatic or erotic, but not every story has to be, and it's certainly an intriguing world he's on.

One point of view on this story is that it's interesting, funny, sexy and imaginative. The other is that it's about a guy with no purpose in life, no serious problems, who has lots of money and gets to fuck anyone he wants. And now he even become a major out of the blue. Overall I like the story and am addicted to it. So if my comments inspire the author to write better - great, if not - I'll still be reading this story.

I copied from the 8th last paragraph and searched this on Google: "Why is Pumpernickel so important?" And I got this as the first result: https://www.huffingtonpost.com/2015/04/08/what-is-pumpernickel-bread_n_7019078.html

Hahaha