All Comments on 'Oh the Games People Play Now'

The interaction between the spouses seemed so natural and believable. As I said, I enjoyed this little slice of life.

He's the only alpha male in that house, that works for me, thanks.

I dont

Humorous and light. Erotic in part,but well done.Thanks

Nothing funny or erotic here.

A very fun likable story. Erotic and offbeat. A refreshing change of pace!

Great piece of writing.

Fabulous writing.

Wonderful change of pace

Really liked it - no cheating whores or husbands - just a sweet and loving wife - why she wanted to expose hubby like that, I don't know but it all seemed very innocent.

Again, she sounds like a wonderful, loving wife - a true rarity.

Because you are really not sure where the story is going and at the end you can wear your imagination out trying to figure out what he is going to require from her....

There's some unfinished story here; but over all you're tale holds water. I see some people have commented on trivial error rather than your writing ability and the merits of the story. I hope you'll keep writing, develop your style and someday thrill us with some kind of Everlasting Gob Stopper narrative. Thanks for writing this one. Ron

....even the towel head ain't "flag waving" and can't you see through bullshit?

The Old Lady's and his wife have things to do. and who know's maybe his Stuck - Up Ex will want some of what she left behind if Hubby Dies or becomes Invalid.

well written and sort of erotic but the guy is kind of a Moron.

I agree, this was a great read. And as a side note,in fantasy wouldn't we all like to have a wife like Sally? "Hell" even the chocolate chip cookies sounded good.

I agree, the lead male is a bit of a moron, and intended to be.

I could make him 6'2" and 3 foot wide shoulders, taking no cr*p off of anyone kind of guy that drives a Maserati. Easy stuff, just type it.

Boring though. Morons get themselves into far more shit and they are lots more fun. Which is what I intended.

I remember an 18 year old redhead with freckles, she was sex on legs and no other description fits.

She turned me right into a moron, let me tell you. LoL.

Anyway, I always do my best to come up with something different. Anybody can write, "He stuck his monstrous 14 incher into her wet pussy, while grabbing her 40DD knockers with both hands"..

Heck with that. Besides, nearly all men turn into morons when all the blood up THERE, rushes DOWN there..

To those who like my work, thank you.

To those that don't..I rilly rilly sory..LoL.

MGM

I can put up with marginal grammar, poor spelling and other technical flaws from the relatively inexperienced writers here, but I don't bother with poor storytellers. You're one of the best on Literotica.

Good read.

LOL the pattern re-emerges heh - only this time the genie is already out of the bottle - you do need to know something about the person you will live with - their past influences their future -

this time it is the wife who is the exhibitionist and gets her jollies off by gett ing her old man to do some posing......now he has done that she will use it as an excuse to go off and do her own thing maybe posing for men then getting fucked....just another putz married to a slut whore...what a plonker he is.....

No clue what I was expecting but I enjoyed this one.

Fun story

That was a.little different. I'm not sure it was a good different though.