All Comments on 'OK Ch. 01-05'

Great to see your latest offering. I hope that there is more of the story to come?

Look forward to enjoying more of your enjoyable writings. Thanks

I'd swear I've read this exact story before. Is this an updated version of an earlier story of yours, or have you posted this somewhere else?

If so, I hope this goes in a different direction. There's a point where you just have to admit that a relationship is over and you're just trying to force a reconnection, and in the original story, the ex-wife was past that point for me near the end.

...at least until questions of plagarism or story recycling are addressed by the poster of this missive.

I, too, have read it before. It is on SOL. Give the author a break. He's a good writer and IMHO the story is worth reading.

Quite a few authors publish on both sites.

I did post this on SOL, made a few improvements.

The title says it all.

Well written as always, only gripe that he did not record interview with Mitch. As it was a vital one that seemed a bit far fetched and more like a plot device than a reflection of reality. I will wait and see on that.

The damn story does not have an ending.

really I find it super impressive that he still is in love with the gal. I really got the impression that his company is betting on the wrong horse.

there could be a good story. simple minded me needs action. slap hapy papy #9

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As with so many of this type of LW story, the unasked, unanswered, underlying question is: Why should any reader ever have any interest whatsoever in a spouse who would put their entire life and the lives of every single person that they care about in the hands of an embecilic sociopath with a proven record of bad decisions? Usually, it is a thrice divorced female "friend" of the wife. I suppose that for the author it is easy, quick, and cheap: a shelf item that readers are familiar with. Every once in a while, an LW author introduces an exception to this rule. Sadly, that did not happen here.

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No forgiving her betrayal... FTDS

unfinished,has no business being posted. wasted readers time with no conclusion. no rating.

Good beginning, looking forward to next installment

SO??????? Part 2

Who would want such a stupid woman back? There is no valid reason for this story to have more than 2 chapters