All Comments on 'Old Tom'

Thanks for the read.

Strange story bit old fashioned but fun, thanks

... that there’s more to come.

A really hot interpretation from the original Story from Lucy54 The allotment

Please go ahead with the next part.

Excitedly waiting for the next episode...

I haven't read much along this vein but even though it progressed very quickly, I liked it. A little more time to expand the roles of the two men and Mary's new understanding of what her husband needs would be great.

What a wonderful story and so much left to go at please continue it is so well done

I loved this story

Old Tom is a charming character and the story is well done.

Waiting for Tom and Jon to share Mary next time.

Great read.

Very similar to The Allotment, I forget the authors name. But similar indeed.

This is a great story as all of them are.

This one has a long way to go. Can,t wait for further episodes

This story just has to be autobiographical. It has to be! Too much richness of detail, too much depth of emotions for Ms. James to have simply made it up. She understands that Jon's ultimate small penis humiliation is the door to her orgasmic happiness. She knows that she can manipulate Tom, and henceforth any other, older man she deems worthy of her sexuality.

Five stars, Ms. James - bravo!

"Old Tom" is the sort of story that causes the imagination of lads, such as myself to experience multiple climaxes. There are just so many tempting treats in this story. I do not believe any male, who has even tentatively fondled fantasies of sexually submissive behavior could fail to fall in lust over this story, and this writer. The great talent of Emily James in this creation is her ability to write of such taboo, sexual intimacies without any of it seeming vulgar or crude.

Let's face it we are all overwhelmed by a guy with a big cock, no matter what his age is. The simplicity of the writing was direct and to the point and left us in no doubt the younger couple both enjoyed the experience. We all can't wait for further instalments of Mary being well-fucked by Tom and Jon's actual participation would be a bonus!

Jon's acceptance of another guy's big dick being needed to please his wife is what makes this story so special.

I hope there are more just like it, following on.

I didn’t find out how come Jon, right at the beginning, was so useless at sex.

I got the impression from his breathlessness and his lack of stamina, that he was at least 70, I was confused when he was still employed.

Well done!!! You write with such confidence! You have the ability to take a story anywhere you want. I need more! I demand more!

Your faithful and devoted reader

Laurence

As an old man wuth a big cock I have found many younger married women enjoy the experience more with someone old enough to be their father who knows how, from experience, to last long enough to give them what their partners can not.

I loved the way you wrote this.

I wish he'd eaten her first. I am an older lady..but still love a person..eating pusst

Loved the story, got all five stars. Sounds like Jon is going to be a 'proper girlie' while Tom fucks his wife. I just have to add that there isn't anything wrong with wearing panties, I do all the time. Although I'm not a monster like old Tom, I'm better built than Jon. Maybe that's just TMI, but wearing panties doesn't necessary make you a girlie. Taking one in the ass while in a dress and panties comes pretty close though :)

Tom seemed very sure of himself, but a little rough. Maybe that was part of the appeal, all man and no girlie. Loved the story and so happy that Mary decided to wear her white full cut panties (I'm bias) for Tom instead of a thong or such.

Well done! 5 stars for you!

I loved it, I love that you're British, it lends to the story being just that much more intriguing and down right sexy in the way that a 'proper lady' should NOT behave this way! Again, well done and thank you for your email, I'll reply as soon as I read a few more of your wonderful stories...

What's wrong with young boys these days? All bloody poofs? Us older chaps still know how to give a woman what she needs,a bit of rough. Great story especially, squishy. You can't beat a nice squishy cunnie, making nice squishy noises as a nice big cut cock rams itself home. Had a woman come back for more a little while ago, her hubby only has a small one! As I pushed her up to the kitchen sink, ripped her tights open , pushed her knickers to one side then shoved my stiff cock deep into her . The first thing she said was "oh fuck, I've really missed you".......

I hope you, Emily, had as much enjoyment writing the story as I did reading it. Old Tom can be an inspiration to many a mature man.

This story had me trembling with desire, imagining Mary getting her fill and telling me she wanted more.

Wonderful, sexy story telling. How I admire and enjoy your craft in the sexiest of ways. Lucy would like your village, I think she has a friend there.

Warning!!!

This is just taken from "The Allotment" by Lucy54.

Loved most of it. My only dislike was the stuff about Jon dressing up like a girl.