by August74
some may like it but not me and it doesn't belong in mature stories.
Just a really baaaaaaaaaaad story and poorly written. Stick to your other job, please.
You went from all gay stories to a topic you know nothing about. Poorly written, unrealistic story line and just plain crummy. I haven't read any of your other stories and won't waste time reading anything else you have to offer. Oh, why did the men have to be black, are you some sort of racist?
Time's a waisting. I think you mean "Time is a wasting". Waist is the narrowest part of the Torso. And WASTE is a type of neglect, instead of use