All Comments on 'Olivia in Vulmonia Ch. 04'

by Morgan_Ellis

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TokioWhoretelTokioWhoretelover 6 years ago
Loving it

I love the positions you put Olivia in. At moments I feel sorry for her, and then the next moment, I'm mentally begging the med students to run a train on her. Awesome story.

Morgan_EllisMorgan_Ellisover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

@ TokioWhoretel, thank you for your comment! I suppose, at times, I am a bit too hard on Olivia. But deep down, I think she enjoys it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I would perform it on the author :p

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Tormenting the patient

Seems that doctors love to torment Olivia and so far she is up to the tasks. Forcing more water than necessary or required is one way of seriously injuring someone. Yeah Olivia seems to be overly sensitive and that works toward the storyline of humiliation for her that I am sure we are going to see in the upcoming chapters. I briefly read a couple of the later chapters and decided to catch up to find out how the story unfolded. Olivia is going to be in for one rough road. I am kind of hoping that she gets some revenge toward the end.

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