All Comments on 'Olivia in Vulmonia Ch. 11'

Great story. I can't think of what would make it better - except perhaps chapter 12, 13 , 14, + 22, 43, 47, 58, 69(what a great number), 75, etc. With your fertile imagination I am sure you can devise a way to delay Olivia's departure indefinitely. She is suppose to pay for her food and storage rental for her clothes and purse, right?

I've really enjoyed the story so far and hope to see much more of Olivia. You're a great writer!

Bo47 and C2H1E,

Thanks so much for your comments and encouragement! I appreciate the feedback. Sorry I was away for a bit. But I'm back and have just submitted Chapter 12. It should be posted within the next few days. I hope you enjoy it!

Olivia will not finish in the allotted time. That is a pure given. I seriously doubt that she will finish the 3 days of 'community service' either. Probably will get some kind of therapy but I doubt that will fix her 'condition'. Olivia will still have to pay court costs and the time spent in jail. Oh, and she still has to get her clothes out of the hospital too which will cost her more time. Olivia is going to spend a lot more time in Vulmonia until she gets herself under control (which we know will not be happening for a long, long time).