All Comments on 'Olivia in Vulmonia Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Another great chapter but man am I looking forward to the next one

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Oliva

Outstanding story, hope to see another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What happens next??

GRRMartin over here writing enthralling tales over here but taking forever to churn them out. On the edge of the seat...after a month! Come back!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it is out soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not looking for cheap thrills?

Of course they are. What else are they there for, oh yeah, medical assistance with marital aids. Yeah, right. Can't wait to see what 'toys' they are going to use. Olivia is not going to like this at all, not one bit. Will she make it? Not bloody likely.

Maybe that man in the hotel should report Luke and Olivia for public nudity? Now that would be interesting to see Luke in the pillory (and naked).

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