All Comments on 'Olivia Needs to Obey'

5-Stars. Enjoyed it, AND it made me uncomfortably horny. Mission Accomplished!!

Quite an enjoyable if disturbing read, well done

One of our best and thanks for sharing it. Would suggest using synonyms for "grunted" and "snorted".

Wow great story, very easy to empathize with her as she went through this.

Excellent!

Amazing story, five stars. I love Olivia's ambiguity towards her abuse, I like her being lent and and used by several guys, you walk the perfect balance between dark rape and disgustingly fake "raped and loving it!" stories. Well done!

Friends, thank you so much! Your kind words and helpful suggestions are much appreciated. I have been experimenting with talking more directly about my interest in noncon and this has been super encouraging. You're all just the best.