All Comments on 'Omnymphotent Ex'

Fantastic! I do hope that you do more with this omnymphotent subject! It’s wonderful!

Very nice short.

Though I wouldn't turn up my nose at more.

Aside from thinking how amusing & hot this story is, all I could think was how lucky this guy is that it was an amiable breakup!

Can you imagine how kind of hell & torture (and maybe repeated death) this guy would endure if it was an angry/hate filled breakup (like most)? <shudder>

At least she seems fond of him & if has any negative feelings towards him, only expresses them via control & "torturing" him with pleasure!

After reading this story I thought "Hmm this could be an interesting world to look at."

And indeed it was, the idea of sex magic with a bit of femdom was alluring. What I did not expect to find in your stories was pure torture. In some of these stories you give physically impossible erections, sensations of blowjobs, boobjobs and whatnot simultaneously and do "orgasm blocks" for hours. That's just torture. The idea of being abused like that for somebody else's needs is truly horrifying. I think I saw one or two where the guys are unaffected by the sex magic but in most of these it all revolves around the same stuff. I think you have a good idea, a interesting concept and talent to make it even better but there is a fine line that you cross a lot of times.

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Hmm love this story. Would love to see things from her side and how she got her powers. :)

This story is incredible. As a writer myself you have talent in abundance. Excellent piece. You should consider getting it published.