All Comments on 'On a Slippery Slope Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Perfect, yet again.

This is the hottest set of stories I think I've ever read. I check this site all the time, just hoping that you have posted another chapter. Please keep it up. I will devour them as quickly as you can write them.

whatshername86whatshername86over 9 years ago
Steamy stuff continues!

This writer continues to delight and arouse me. Just when I think this story can't get any more erotic, it does. Creating a personal relationship among the four and not just sexual escapades, adds an interesting twist. This chapter is especially hot.

parker3522parker3522over 9 years ago
Watching Someone Having Sex

I learned a long time ago that watching other people having sex is incredible. A younger Lady being fucked soundly in an adjacent bed by her boyfriend who did not realize I had woken up. Her eyes were on my eyes all the time she was being pounded. Delightful!

The writer continues to deliver a very sexy, erotic narrative of the adventure of these four people. Nice job! I look forward to the next chapters.

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