All Comments on 'On My Son's 21'st Birthday'

Loved it. I so enjoyed the smooth limo ride pacing of story.

Absolutely brilliant story, exactly right. I loved the careful build up to the finale, they were made for each other. Hopefully there's a follow up to this, maybe a breeding programme? All the details in the build up were exquisite - thank you. Good work.

WOW IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT. THIS IS A FANTASTIC STORY OF WHICH WE MUST HAVE MORE. PLEASE, YOU MUST DO A SEQUEL. THANKS

Great start. Hope there's more and he gets her pregnant

You've written a masterful tale of mother/son incest! The characters are very real and likable…something that a lot of writers don't manage to achieve. Future installments might detract from the wonderful intimacy that they share now. Perhaps this little gem should stand alone! 5 stars!

Amazingly erotic, Thank You for my wet pussy your words blew me away, again and again, and again . . .

Very well written! A couple more chapters, please!

Many of them even think that it'd be real interesting to try out their hard young cock up inside it, its being their own birth canal and all. Yet ultimately they chicken out. They should learn a lesson from Jack, who's actually fucked his own mother. He asks her, "how can I go back to regular girls when you get me off like that?" The simple truth is that nothing can ever feel as good to a boy's cock, as comfy and cozy, as warm and loving, just so damn right, as his own mother's cunt. Sure, a boy'll try out twats his own age. After all, he's a young male, practically a walking hard on. He's got to blow his young balls like all the time, and he'll do it up any suitable female. But once he's sampled his own mom, he'll never bother with inferior twats. He'll dedicate every drop of semen in those hot young balls of his to the one unique ultimate cunt of all his boyish dreams--the same incomparable cunt he came out of, his own mommy's.

Love he details!

I'd like to hear about their next date.

it's piqued, unless he just ejaculated down his leg.

the tale is fair, but a little bit of a ramble.

Great story but for me it's incomplete and needs a sequel Yes the sons main target was his mum for his birthday treat and got her. Mission completed. End of story, l think not. You mentioned earlier in this story he had an elder sister why didn't you utilise her in this great story as well. ( what mum can do, I can do better or here little brother I give you my cherry happy 21st ) Why not add the sister to his hit list of fantasies and the three of them live happily ever after....all together....just a thought, still I gave you 5 stars

a sequal....nice writing and nicely paced. and wow. no haters yet!

It brought me back to when i first fucked my mom. Damn i wish she alive so i could again

Nicely written with good detail without going too far over the top.

I have seen many good stories like this spoilt by trying to eek more out of it and I think you have reached the right place to stop.

This is a great Fuck Mommy story. It was long in build-up, but near-perfect in delivery. I agree with the other comments that it deserves a sequel. One where his gorgeously hot mommy would help him do every beautiful friend she had, just so she could get him to keep filling her with cock and tongue, Bravo!

I don't give 5 *'s out in fact I think I've only done it 3 times in 3 years ! Well done !

Well done. Really reminds me of my mother many years ago. Not same circumstances, but the effect the same. I still live it through stories like yours. Keep it coming. Readers interested can still read my story "Memories of Mum" written by an American friend of mine after I told my tale to him while on holiday from England in the US.

A very hot story! Jack molded his mom into the sexy babe he knew she was. Susan found the perfect man to make her feel young, and horny, again. They will enjoy each other tremendously.

My goodness. I'm glad we found this.

What happens the next day? Well written

His mom was a cheating whore. End of story.