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slyc_willie over 16 years ago

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A touching memory followed by a mysterious gift. I like how you got into her head. Present-tense stories don't usually read well, but you pulled me into the room with Beth. Well done.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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