by MemberX
Nicely written. Love the unexpected-expected turn...can't wait to read Ch 2.
I would love to be the one on the other balcony. We have been watched, but not from this close. Loved it.
Interesting story. I really like the idea of each couple serving as inspiration for the other. I would enjoy seeing where you go with this.
This one was one of my all time favorites under your old account. This is something my wife and I have done, minus the other people, so I've always enjoyed the story. Glad to see there might be a sequel. Hope it comes soon!