All Comments on 'On the Canal Bank and After'

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Would like to see a follow up with maybe the mother and daughter getting together

I am trying to read all of the entries and vote to support the other contestants.

The jumping around viewpoint was a little jarring but I can't put my finger on why so maybe it's just me.

Very hot sex.

I find the idea that women will go completely moronic at the sight of a huge cock somewhat far fetched but I suppose if there are women out there like that...it could run in families. LOL passed down gene for big cock fetish.

All in all an enjoyable read.

I wasn't crazy about mother and daughter watching each other though.

I enjoyed the story, quite entertaining.

I've never had occasion to go completely moronic at the sight of a huge cock, as jonthechaosman questioned, but I'd kinda like to give it a try and see what I've been missing. ;)