All Comments on 'On the Other Hand Ch. 05-06'

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Sidney43Sidney43almost 10 years ago

I thought that Will came across as too pushy about this month long absence. They have a relationship, but not that committed yet and she told him she couldn't tell him and he gave her a bit of an interrogation which should have been annoying. I get that his vocation means he asks questions, but normally people try to separate their business life from personal when they might cause conflict.

In fact as I think about it, since there is the hint of Government involved, they would have asked her if she needed a cover story to explain the absence. The way she dropped it on Will leaves the impression that this was a last minute trip that was unplanned and she (and "THEY") were unprepared for her personal life issues.

bazreidsbazreidsalmost 10 years ago
intrigue

if this is going where i think it is... going to be another excellent story

will not say anymore as it could be a spoiler

well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You have written many good stories.

But I really can't get into this one.

If "left" me feeling very disjointed.

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
AFTER THE PHANTOM,,,ITS SWITCH GEARS TIME

and off to Scooby Doo. TK U MLJ LV NV

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 9 years ago
Enjoying it

Intrigue developing.

ohyessssssohyessssssover 8 years ago
:-)

A little twist. I feel his pain.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I do believe, once I found out she would be leaving for long periods of time, I would of told her I wasn't interested in spending anytime with her. Not good for developing a relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

It's getting interestinger regarding this gal that works for a group giving away money.Could she possibly be giving something else away? She said she loves a mystery...She is a mystery!

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